Sunday, September 13, 2009

More Proofreading

Don't know how late I can stay up - but on to the Eighth Circle!!

Attack by giant owls? WTF? (Had to have some analog to Geryon!)

UPDATE: Ah - the pimp! Maybe my favorite male sinner after the Epicurean! And I know the simoniac and soothsayer are coming up!!

UPDATE: OMG! I have one of the characters speak a line from King Lear! That's pretty slick, sneaking it in there like that!

UPDATE: Ah - the mass crucifixion! Nothing quite says "Welcome to Hell!" so clearly, does it? And oh my stars and garters - the Bushisms I put in the mouth of the lead executioner! Crackin' me up all over!

FINAL UPDATE: And thus, we beheld the stars! And awww - it's a nice ending. Sniffly and nice.

Again, my apologies for its tardiness, but I know you all are going to say "Wow!" when you read it.


Blogger John Goodrich said...

Giant Owls... Surely not a Phailbin reference.

12:16 PM  
Blogger KPaffenroth said...

Pshaw! Surely not!

12:27 PM  

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