Saturday, February 28, 2009

Kissy Face Stuff!

I just realized, with only a few more chapters to go, there isn't much time for teaser paragraphs! And I liked this one!

"He stared back at her, as steadily as he could with the ringing buzz in his head. Besides having balls, the gal was a looker, you had to say. She looked so damn fine in the dim light coming up from their flashlights, which were still pointed at the ground. Together with the fog of their breath, she looked like some fairy or demon queen an Arthurian knight would think he saw in the mist as he searched for the Grail. So fucking cold and beautiful and intelligent – you couldn’t believe she was real, and you’d let her have your soul, if that’s what she wanted. If this were a film, they’d kiss now. Or hell, if this were a porn movie – well, that’d have a really happy ending. But this wasn’t Malory or Hollywood. This was New Jersey, so they just stood there, cold and tired and hurt."


Blogger Bobbie Metevier said...

Yeah, the teasers are a good idea. They make me want to read more!

You've captured something sensual here and sort of vulnerable. At the same time, I thought the line about New Jersey was fitting and funny.

4:17 PM  

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