Friday, January 23, 2009

21,700 Words and Teaser Sentence of the Week

Chapter Eight is the way I want it to be.

And I normally don't approve of one sentence "zinger" paragraphs that understate some shocking thing for effect. BUT - you need to use every tool in the toolbox, so here's one of those!

"The four-thousand pound bomb that had smashed a piece of masonry into Greta Hahn’s head was of a type nicknamed 'cookies' by the RAF crews, and the Hahns had just been subjected to a process the Allies described as 'dehousing.'"


Blogger John Goodrich said...

You may want to make that a four thousand pound bomb.

4:31 PM  
Blogger KPaffenroth said...

Clearly I read the .doc file more than the blog. But there it is.

4:35 PM  

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