Just a Little More Editing

Since D.L. is busy editing Bill Carl's awesome werewolf novel, Bestial, and since I kept finding little things that needed fixing, I decided to give the whole D2L2 manuscript one more going over. The tweaks are great, but what's great is some of the patterns I put in the first time. I mean it - I'm going over something, and I realize it's parallel to something in a different chapter and I've set up a nice contrast, and I know I did NOT put that in deliberately when I wrote it a few weeks ago! The whole creative process is just so mysterious and gratifying.